Friday, September 10, 2021

The Start of The Stinking Life

Kia ora bloggers, Me and my friend have been making and story called The Stinking Life which has a story about two girls who have stinking life's but they basically share everything even their life but they DO NOT  share pets for some reason because if they did they would fight to the death and get in trouble with their mum and dad. Their Brothers are SO mean and bossy so one of the girls had a idea.

Please tell me if you had written a story before, in the comments below.

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2021 at 12:10 PM

    Hi Delilah, it's your best friend Rosie and our story is really good isn't it, well I love that you have explaned about the story and you've done really well, next time maybe we can talk about their parents more?

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